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Submitted by asmasta808 at 2019-02-17 21:47:40 EST
Rating: 1.5 on 2 ratings (3 reviews) (Review this item) (V)

In a world where one's life-worth is determined by predestined "frequencies",MC is a low-born that attempts to change his fate by starting a relationship with The Girl, a high born savant.

Despite teachers and parents who tell MC that The Girl and he are opposites which will never attract,MC attempts throughout his youth to court The Girl with no success.The Girl,being of high frequency,is unable to feel emotion;however, her goal is to feel love.MC's friend,Suzuka,tries to help MC raise his frequency,a feat claimed to be impossible.During his teenage years,MC uses magnets and other methods with no avail.

Upon returning as a young adult to The Girl's birthday,he claims to be able to raise his frequency and eventually manages a kiss from The Girl. The two walk home together.MC discovers with Suzuka that sound waves,when combined with gibberish 2-syllable words,are able to temporarily raise one's frequency.They create a phone device which,based on the atmosphere,is able to determine which words can raise one's frequency.

However, MC and The Girl discover that the words actually have mind controlling properties which caused their love. A government organization detains MC and his associates, revealing that this phenomenon had been known throughout history and was slowly forgotten. Unable to contact Suzuka, MC uses the words to paralyze his captors and escape.

He escapes to Suzuka's house,where Suzuka's father reveals that music,specifically that of Suzuki Airi,was able to balance everyone's frequencies and nullify the mind controlling power of words.Suzuka is able to calculate an equation based on music and discover that fate exists.He is able to predict the future and the destinies of others.MC and The Girl realize their love was caused by fate not choice.Finding this romantic,the two hold hands while Suzuka watches and realizes he can take over the world!


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Submitted by Bestmate2 at 2019-03-01 16:39:36 EST (#)
Rating: 1

Well, I must confess I was lost, but strangely beguiled.

Submitted by Murphy1844 at 2019-02-26 22:27:10 EST (#)

I tried, but this makes no sense. Craft one single sentence in clear, direct language, then try and compel readers after that. If you can't do the former, you can't do the latter. Cheers regards, Murphy

Submitted by asmasta808 at 2019-02-17 21:47:53 EST (#)
Rating: 2

im the best


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