Could (366 hits)
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Submitted by kL (View user info) at 2006-11-09 14:59:22 EST
What could be sweeter
There's no greater prize
Than those sweet locks of hair
Falling over your eyes.
And how coy are you
When fleeting eyes shine
But what could compare
To when those eyes meet mine.
And I had a dream
You were flying above
And I could believe
That we were in love.
And oh what a warmth
And oh what a feel
When what which was could
Has now become real.
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Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2006-11-09 17:27:04 EST (#)
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Submitted by cshape (user info) at 2006-11-09 15:29:37 EST (#)
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WUT CUD B SWET3R
TH3RAS NO GRE8R PRIEZ
THAN THOSA SWET LOX OF HARE
FALNG OVER UR EYES!1!11!!! WTF
AND HOW COY R U
WH3N FLETNG 3YAS SHIEN
BUT WUT CUD R
2 WHEN THOSE EYES MET MIEN!1111!11 WTF
AND I HAD A DREM U WARA FLYNG ABOV3
AND I CUD BLEIV3
TAHT WE WERE IN LOVE!!!!!1!1 OMG WTF LOL
AND O WUT A WARMTH
AND O WUT A FEL
WH3N WUT WHICH WAS CUD
HAS NOW BCOME REAL
!1!1! OMG WTF LOL
this is awesome.
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2006-11-09 15:06:27 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
People hate poetry around here enough already without you making it worse by writing legitimately bad stuff
Submitted by beauxjizzle (user info) at 2006-11-09 15:04:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
im in love with you now. suck my dick.
Submitted by FartSmeller (user info) at 2006-11-09 15:01:28 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Stand back, I've got this covered:
WUT CUD B SWET3R
TH3RAS NO GRE8R PRIEZ
THAN THOSA SWET LOX OF HARE
FALNG OVER UR EYES!1!11!!! WTF
AND HOW COY R U
WH3N FLETNG 3YAS SHIEN
BUT WUT CUD R
2 WHEN THOSE EYES MET MIEN!1111!11 WTF
AND I HAD A DREM U WARA FLYNG ABOV3
AND I CUD BLEIV3
TAHT WE WERE IN LOVE!!!!!1!1 OMG WTF LOL
AND O WUT A WARMTH
AND O WUT A FEL
WH3N WUT WHICH WAS CUD
HAS NOW BCOME REAL
!1!1! OMG WTF LOL
Submitted by cshape (user info) at 2006-11-09 14:59:35 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
gay poetry alert.