I Wrote You All Some End-Of-Summer Emo Poetry. (DEATH TO THE EMOS!!!) (562 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -1.33 on 6 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by EmoPoetrySucks (View user info) at 2006-08-10 02:32:41 EDT
summer is slipping away
so with a blade I will play
i miss when it wasn't so rusty
but my blade is always trusty!
now it will be cold again
but the cold is my friend
cause in the summer I suffer heat attack
when I put on all my black.
I always love my trusty knife
I'll use to take my life
if the knife breaks and I've no hope
I can just use my trusty rope!
If the rope wears to thin
I'll just shoot some heroine
And if the heroine's watered down
I think that I will try to drown
Oh well, I guess I cannot die
Teh emo tears I will go cry.
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Submitted by UnderOathMeal (user info) at 2006-08-10 09:11:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
-2DIE
Submitted by Samo (user info) at 2006-08-10 08:58:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Dis is nahs
Submitted by fun_with_needles (user info) at 2006-08-10 04:38:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
OW, my sense of meter.
I am tired but cant fall asleep.
I think that I'm thinking to much
My eyelids are HEAVY, my thoughts are deep
Love and life and death and such
Laying on the hardwood floor
And contemplating what?
The light is on, I've closed the door
I have no lock, but it stays shut
And "she" comes to mind
That dreaded lovely "her"
Closing my eyes, I'm stricken blind
Watching the computer screen turn to a blur
I read and re-read my words
I wonder what I mean
But love is so absurd
And love is so obsene
And I wonder what she would think
If she kew it was for her I wrote
And suddenly I blink
And my heart cant stay afloat
If you were with me
If you were here
I'd hold you to me
And in your ear
I would whisper the song that my heart is singing
The one that I cannot write
Love is all that I ask you to be bringing
To brighten this darkest night
And so, I think I'll lie down and sleep now
Or maybe just stare at the wall
I'll walk to the edge and swim ever deep now
If you promise to catch me when I fall.
Goodnight, goodnight, goodnight.
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2006-08-10 04:04:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
EmoPoetrySucks sucks.
Submitted by ballsonurchin (user info) at 2006-08-10 03:28:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
ur such a fag
Submitted by forthewin (user info) at 2006-08-10 03:25:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
What's with all the emo bashing? I'm not sure that I understand.
Old insults, you keep rehashing, why don't you act more like a man?
Just hunt them down with bayonets, kitchen knives, and sticks.
Find and rape their trusty pets, end their lives, and cut off their-
Um... Okay, I think I'm done.