Lost (440 hits)
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Submitted by EmoPoetrySucks (View user info) at 2006-08-09 00:37:51 EDT
I question every move I make
I question every answer
I don't even know who I am
How should I know if I love her?
I'm deaf to every sound I hear
And blind to the sights I see
I want to, need to hold her near
I can't have her close to me
Her image is burned in my mind
But still I cannot find her
I open my eyes but I am blind
Because I'm not beside her
I'm lost without a hope
And I'm hoping to be found
I don't know what I'll know
Once I'm back on solid ground
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Submitted by Life101 (user info) at 2006-08-09 19:16:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
My poem didnt do this good.
Submitted by whysenheimer (user info) at 2006-08-09 19:06:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Fag below.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-08-09 15:01:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
pretty good, you should join the International Poets Society, i hear they're hiring.
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2006-08-09 07:44:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Die die die
Die die die die die die
Die die die die die?
Die die die
Darkness darkness darkness darkness
Darkness darkness darkness
Darkness darkness?
Darkness darkness darkness
Cut cut cut cut cut
cut cut
cut cut cut cut?
cut.
Submitted by DirtyDoubleEntendre (user info) at 2006-08-09 00:51:24 EDT (#)
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hahaha!
Submitted by forthewin (user info) at 2006-08-09 00:48:15 EDT (#)
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everyone hates me.
they don't understand.
why i don't use capitals,
and don't dress like a man.
everyone hates me.
i don't know why.
in fits of emo frenzy,
i cut myself and cry.
everyone hates me.
my parents do too.
they made me take a shower.
that's sufficient proof.
everyone hates me.
even the kids at school.
the jocks make me cry.
i almost drowned in the pool.
they held my head down.
i couldn't breath.
my screams made no sound.
emo tears flowed free.
everyone hates me.
my life has no hope.
but i'm too much of a pussy,
to use this knotted rope.
-forthewin