What Used to be a Quiet life II (798 hits)
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Submitted by Walrus_King <jamespeddle.at.hotmail.com> (View user info) at 2005-03-22 08:18:19 EST
For review- What Used to be a Quiet life I http://www.ubersite.com/m/62339 .
It had been a week since Sandra was attacked by her old drug dealer Julian. She was looking a lot better, she had slight movement in her finger plus the bruising and swelling was going down. I moved back in with her to make sure she was ok and look after her while she got back on her feet. I couldn't even put my hand on her shoulder without her flinching like crazy.
You maybe wondering why I moved back in with her, why did I go over in the first place to help, I imagine that the truth is that I still care, I don't know if it is possible to just fall out of love with someone just because of a couple of rows. I was only 20 and she was only 21, my mum had always told me that things like this would happen and that I would find someone else but for now that is the last thing on my mind I had more pressing matters on my mind at the moment.
I picked up the phone and dialled, with every touch of the keypad I sweated a little bit more,
'Hello' The dial tones stopped and a deep voice came down the receiver
'Hi Cain, it's James'
'Alright mate how's it going we have to meet up for a drink sometime'
'Yeah, how about today, I need to speak to you, rather urgently'
'Ok, I'll get the train down where are you? I don't recognise this number'
'Do you remember my old flat?' I asked
'Yeah I do, have you managed to get that whore to move out and give it back then?'
'Nah, she's here with me, I'll see you in a bit' I hung up the phone. When I turned around Sandra was staring at me;
'Who was that' She asked me, her voice cut into me, I thought about lying but I figured she would know in a few hours anyway.
'It was Cain.' I didn't know quite how she would take this news. After all she knew Cain lived close to Julian. She calmly said to me;
'Oh, why are you calling him?'
'I'm calling in a favour' That was the end of the conversation pretty much, she just said 'oh' and walked into the bedroom and sat on the bed. I followed her in and sat next to her;
'Well I'm not planning on staying here forever, I've got to get back home soon and the only way I'm going to do that is if I know that your safe, there is only one way I can think of to make sure you feel safe.'
'Well I just thought...' She trailed off, Then she looked me in the eyes and kissed me passionately. It was a kiss not unlike those we had shared when we were first going out, before the honey moon period was over. I tore myself away and sat in the living room. Sandra walked in 5 minutes later. She had got changed into a pink, lacey, see-through dress with straps on the back. Well honestly how could I resist that, I don't know if she was trying to seduce me into staying with her or what but I couldn't help myself anymore, I still loved this girl and after sharing a bed with her for the past week it was only what I had wanted to do anyway, I'll just have to be careful of her injuries.
I walked up to her and placed one hand on her cheek and kissed her, much more gently this time with my other hand I gripped her soft arse cheeks, all this time we were slowly walking into the bedroom she started to unbutton my shirt as I pushed her onto the bed. By now my hand had moved round the front and was gently stroking and rubbing through her nighty she let out a little gasp as I slid one and then two fingers in. I broke away to start nibbling on her neck while she undid my trousers and dropped them to the floor.....
Before I knew it hours had passed and we were laying there having a post-coital cigarette. The bed in the flat sat opposite the toilet door, it was a terrible design because it meant when there were guests staying over they had to walk through the master bedroom to get to the toilet. Back when it was my flat people used to walk through at the worst of times. In the end I put a sign up which read;
KNOCK
(or I'll break your legs)
As we both laid there I heard a slight noise coming from the direction of the toilet, then there was a flush. Now this was about as funny as cancer, not only was there someone hiding in my toilet but they have the nerve to use it as well. They better have not been dropping a log in there. I rolled off the bed grabbing my half-pool cue as I went, stark bollock naked I opened the door.
"Oh sorry James, did I disturb you" A house breaker by nature he hadn't been able to get an answer at the front door so had decided to let himself in.
"YOU FUCKING CUNT! WHAT THE HELL DID YOU THINK YOU WERE PLAYING AT, YOU NEARLY GAVE ME A FUCKING HEART ATTACK!"
Cain was here
User Reviews
Submitted by munkeypants (user info) at 2005-03-22 13:31:03 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by snarf (user info) at 2005-03-22 10:52:43 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
"I gripped her soft arse cheeks"
for some reason i laughed out loud at that!
your a romantic at heart!
Submitted by Walrus_King (user info) at 2005-03-22 10:47:05 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
nah not the whole time, I'll write what he was doing into the next one.
No probs Mrwolf, I haven't written part 3 yet, but I'll let you know when it's done.
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2005-03-22 09:57:16 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
He was hiding in the bathroom the whole time y'all were doing it? What a perv.
Submitted by mrwolf (user info) at 2005-03-22 09:45:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by phuzzygish (user info) at 2005-03-22 09:40:48 (#)
Ranking: 2
Pock, you only want it 'cos it's got descriptions of rude lady parts in it... Come on. Admit it.
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Dammit Phuzzy, shush would ya.
Submitted by phuzzygish (user info) at 2005-03-22 09:40:48 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Pock, you only want it 'cos it's got descriptions of rude lady parts in it... Come on. Admit it.
Submitted by Dannie (user info) at 2005-03-22 09:39:28 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Very good. I like Cain already.
Submitted by mrwolf (user info) at 2005-03-22 09:29:36 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Brilliant story this... Want part3 now. Don't suppose you could email the link to me once its done at wolfsweb.at.hotmail.com just to make sure I don't miss it could you?
Submitted by phuzzygish (user info) at 2005-03-22 09:13:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I know, I know. I'm sorry man. Have another.
Submitted by DamianD (user info) at 2005-03-22 08:56:31 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Made me laugh
Submitted by Walrus_King (user info) at 2005-03-22 08:26:26 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Sorry I forgot to say that was in jest. No problem mate.
Submitted by Walrus_King (user info) at 2005-03-22 08:26:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
You know I have real problems getting a perfect 2 on posts. It would be nice... just once...
Submitted by phuzzygish (user info) at 2005-03-22 08:24:21 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Shit. Sorry.
Submitted by phuzzygish (user info) at 2005-03-22 08:23:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
I'd be interested to see where this is going...
Submitted by Spam (user info) at 2005-03-22 08:21:36 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I am enjoying this.