age of blood (469 hits)
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Submitted by iambetteratit (View user info) at 2009-09-17 00:20:47 EDT
Something had awoken him, something had been foolish enough to break the spiritual wards of his prison. At long last he could resume his holy work. In his mind's eye he could clearly see a brazen throne sat atop a mountain of skulls rising from an ocean of blood. Dark, powerful laughter echoed and boomed in his mind. None of these thoughts registered, nor would they matter if he could understand them. The only thing that he was aware of was the overwhealming rage, and bloodlust which was his entire being. He existed only to kill in the name of he who thirsts, and after six thousand years he had many offerings to make.
Soundlessly he stood to his full height, over 9 feet tall and with a brutish physique of rippling muscle, dense bone and scar tissue. The scars were all self inflicted of course. There was not a weapon on the planet that could harm him save his own. He reached down and hefted his massive greataxe, and his creully serrated dagger, slipping the latter into a sheath on his belt, he headed in the direction of the sounds which had awoken him. Kharn the prince of blood had returned.
The doctor was so pleased with himself, he had made what would be without a doubt, the most amazing discovery of his time, a massive toomb complex just outside of the modern city of Denver, and he would be the first man in to witness the treasures of a lost and unknown civilization he was utterly amazed by the scenes of battle and death the ancients had painted on the wall in a long dead language, why then did he feel a growing sense of dread?
The first of many sacrifices stood in front of him five men in strange clothing wearing no armor and carrying no weapons, the blood of weaklings would not be as sweet as that of a warrior, but it had been a long time since he had last ended a life. This would have to do. A sudden spike of white hot rage filled him and he charged soundlessly at his victims, not even pausing to draw a weapon. He intended to rip these things apart with his bare hands.
The doctor had become overcome with a sense of terror and dread, the others felt it too, but as he held his flashlight high and peered around him into the darkness he could find no reason for his fear, he took a deep breath and turned around to give his men the order to push on when suddenly he saw something huge moving towards him, moving entirely to fast for it's massive size. He caught a glimpse of something huge, and human shaped with pale white skin and eyes that spoke of utter madness and bloodlust giving off a faint red glow. As he wondered what on earth it could possibly be the others in his excavation party caught sight of it too, and the screaming began.
Kharn grabbed the screaming man as he tried to flee. He lifted the fragile thing into the air with one hand, he felt it's bones shatted under his grip and he smashed the victims head into the low ceiling. The man's skull split like a rotten pumpkin and his blood flowed freely and rained from the ceiling. Kharn was overtaken by a brief moment of elation, but it was gone as quickly as it had come. he turned and found the rest of the men running from him at the sight of the raveged body of their leader. Kharn drew his dagger and hurled it into a running man's back. He collapsed immeadietly as the blade severed the spinal colum and burst from it's chest in a torrent of blood. He spent the next few minutes hunting down and killing the remaining humans with his greataxe and dagger.
When all of the men were dead he reached down into each corpse and rubbed their blood onto his body. Unsatisfied with his kills he sheathed his blades and started towards the exit of the prison that once held him powerless. Mankind had forsaken their god, and so their god had forsaken them. He was free to bring about a new age of blood, and this time nothing would stand in his way.
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Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2009-09-21 14:18:46 EDT (#)
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WOW! you're, like, everything simon wants to be in a writer!
Submitted by X54 (user info) at 2009-09-19 00:46:50 EDT (#)
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Submitted by AshK (user info) at 2009-09-19 00:25:51 EDT (#)
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Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2009-09-18 01:31:23 EDT (#)
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Hmmm...
Submitted by BranDo (user info) at 2009-09-17 14:30:19 EDT (#)
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Götterdämmerung!
but then gay like Bert said.
Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2009-09-17 10:06:25 EDT (#)
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son of beowulf?
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2009-09-17 04:41:48 EDT (#)
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Seriously, this post was enormously gay. Replace "Greataxe" and "Dagger" with penis and anus respectivly and it is basically gay porn.
Was that the intention? If so, it could have done with being shorter and more pithy.
Submitted by frankthebear (user info) at 2009-09-17 01:33:48 EDT (#)
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alas for Kharn! the brightest flames burn out too soon!
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2009-09-17 01:05:36 EDT (#)
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You gotta love Kharn, he gets so much done in a day.