Superman ain't saving shit (737 hits)
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Submitted by <Art> (View user info) at 2008-05-17 01:56:45 EDT
We all make mistakes. We have regrets, but inevitably learn that regret without personal growth is stagnancy.
It may be difficult to bear folly which tears at the very fabric of an inhabited reality. Suddenly the person reflected back at you no longer exists, and all that ever did exist resides in a shattered heart.
With a spade in hand, I cracked mantle and tore deep in to the very depths of my own inferno, a personal hell, with absence as my sole tormentor.
As any parasite would upon destruction of a habitat, quickly we become attached to new host bodies and construct new realities, and new relationships.
Time passes, and things inevitably change.
Making peace with that which has deceased is a day to day struggle. Control is minimal, as thoughts pervade idle moments, and long restless nights seem to crack listlessly in to dawn.
Our actions define our character. What is in our hearts is inherently interior, and can only be expressed to a certain degree; frustration ensues.
I suppose people can only say what they feel and grow accordingly, regardless of selfish desires for closure; ones own feelings are of no worth in the face of an overwhelmingly adverse reality.
Sometimes we fall short of attaining the very standards we set for ourselves, and in doing so regret retiring moments which seem to command the ebb and flow of life beyond our current control and discretion.
Giving up is rarely the right choice, but knowing when to give up is equally important.
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Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2008-05-20 12:19:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
"They're nihilists, Donny, they believe in nothing."
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2008-05-19 22:36:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
http://www.ubersite.com/m/116824
Submitted by Lib (user info) at 2008-05-19 14:26:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
nice
Submitted by CarterPFly (user info) at 2008-05-19 12:26:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
You need to crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and to hear the lamentation of the women. Then you will be happy and fulfilled. All this introspective faggotry will embarrass you in a couple years time when you look back and go "oh my fucking god I was such a wanker"
Still teenage angst has to be delt with somehow eh!!!
Submitted by LittleMonster (user info) at 2008-05-19 10:06:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
To balance out my rating, because CT has a point.
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2008-05-19 09:44:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2008-05-17 01:12:23 CDT (#)
Ranking: -2
If you're not an Ethiopian digging maggots out of your gangrenous leg for dinner at age 8 then you have no right to indulge in this sort of masturbatory depression.
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Who are you to pass judgment on a man for his god-given right to think/feel as he does?
Yes, his thoughts/world-view may not line up with yours, and indeed perhaps he is not wont to compare his suffering to that of someone in a third-world country, but he has the right to write/cognize as he so chooses, and no one can take that away from him.
+2 for writing from the heart.
Submitted by LittleMonster (user info) at 2008-05-19 07:42:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Dimebenda (user info) at 2008-05-17 20:46:30 EDT (#)
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My thought processes are of little consequence to you. I'm not here to impress, rather, I'm deciphering the confusion within for my own benefit.
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Oh dear. You have missed the point here then haven't you. Write a diary, or join a blog site for that kind of thing. Here, the point IS to write/Draw/Womble your way through a post for others entertainment.
Bubba, Please come and translate what I'm saying here, I have little doubt that it wont be understood. Too basic *sneers*, too simple.
Submitted by orph (user info) at 2008-05-19 04:01:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Unbearable sesquipedalianism
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2008-05-18 21:10:05 EDT (#)
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I'll ignore "loud mouthed incompetence" which doesn't make any sense either and stick to asking the same questions in my previous response that you have so far failed to answer.
Submitted by Dimebenda (user info) at 2008-05-18 14:27:19 EDT (#)
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You need to let some of the air out of that big head of yours, buddy.
I don't see how your half-cooked presumptions about a person based on a few paragraphs of text hold any weight.
Disagreements and criticism are accepted and welcome. You, however, attempt to inflate your self-worth by trying to debase me with blatantly excessive bouts of loud-mouthed incompetence and excessive superiority.
Submitted by AsshOly (user info) at 2008-05-18 09:09:40 EDT (#)
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GIRL YOU CAN JUMP ON SHADYS DICK
STRAIGHT FROM THE HIP
CUT TO THE CHASE
I TELL A MOTHERFUCKIN SLUT TO HER FACE
PLAY NO GAMES
SAY NO NAMES
EVER SINCE I BROKE OVER WHATSHERFACE
IM A DIFFERENT MAN
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2008-05-18 05:34:24 EDT (#)
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oooh - you are a proper twat. Grow up will you?
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2008-05-18 05:14:45 EDT (#)
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"If you really believe even half of your judgements are sound, then your hubris pales in comparison to my "flawed" writing style. "
Can you please explain to me the intended meaning of this sentence?
How would my hubris paling in comparison to your writing style be contingent on my belief in my own judgments?
How can hubris "pale in comparison to" a writing style in the first place?
I'd forgive your pretentious writing if you didn't sacrifice any modicum of clarity you fucking dickhead.
I get the impression you're a precocious high-schooler who's opinion of their own literacy is totally overinflated. Go outside and play with the other kids.
Submitted by Dimebenda (user info) at 2008-05-18 02:16:53 EDT (#)
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I'm not trying, my friend.
You, however, seem intent on steering this short bus you call contention off in to a ravine.
I am simply being myself. Some people don't like that. Fuck'em. If you really believe even half of your judgements are sound, then your hubris pales in comparison to my "flawed" writing style.
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2008-05-17 23:06:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
The integration of extraneous or unnecessary verbosity into this variety of fustian rhetoric does more to portray an inability to expound with lucidity than literary proficiency. And that is not just specious casuistry, that's fact.
Submitted by Dimebenda (user info) at 2008-05-17 20:46:30 EDT (#)
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My thought processes are of little consequence to you. I'm not here to impress, rather, I'm deciphering the confusion within for my own benefit.
Your transcendency complex is based on nothing but a conglomeration of words, which, once again, act as a catalyst for my personal reformation.
Whether or not it hits close to home is not my decision, and none of my concern.
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2008-05-17 16:24:45 EDT (#)
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The purpose of language is to communicate, not to dazzle with purported brilliance.
1) Venture into the world and locate one who wishes to place his turgid penis into your sphincter and ravage you like the wanton beast you are.
2) Go get fucked in the ass.
Both mean the same, but the first attempts to be "cool and literary," just like your post.
Submitted by X54 (user info) at 2008-05-17 13:34:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2008-05-17 03:24:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Introspection is for emo fags.
A man's life should be lived in the bullish pursuit of an ideology with complete ignorance and disdain of the merits or morality of that ideology's alternatives.
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I couldn't agree more. Still, it was a nicely written piece. Except for the clash between "as any parasite would" and "quickly we become."
dreams that have shattered
may not have mattered
take another point of view
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2008-05-17 09:47:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
You're right - Superman saves people, not shit. God helps those that help themselves. Allah is lifted on strong backs. Buddha shows us there is a path but we must walk it. See the theme here?
Submitted by AsshOly (user info) at 2008-05-17 05:04:05 EDT (#)
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dont never mind lungfish, his review of your performance was spot on in my professional opinion, lieutenant.
Submitted by BranDo (user info) at 2008-05-17 03:37:36 EDT (#)
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stagnancy
that's my word for the weekend, stagnancy.
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2008-05-17 03:33:39 EDT (#)
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Never mind.
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2008-05-17 03:24:02 EDT (#)
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Introspection is for emo fags.
A man's life should be lived in the bullish pursuit of an ideology with complete ignorance and disdain of the merits or morality of that ideology's alternatives.
Submitted by Dimebenda (user info) at 2008-05-17 03:10:35 EDT (#)
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If your point is that reading this was like watching a dog chasing his tail, then I do see your point, and am not going to refute it.
I'm aware that these problems are only as permanent as my mindset, and in the grand scheme, are just portions of the insignificant plight of another imperfect creature.
It may be difficult to understand or relate, however in many ways writing to me is like shouting underwater, and the therapeutic value of unleashing my inner demons on to a page is more than validated through my disposition and personal insight after the fact.
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2008-05-17 02:55:52 EDT (#)
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Okay. There are many problems with this. Perhaps too many for me to address. But, lucky you, I've had some beer and I've had some whiskey, and more pertinently, the menu thing on my tv is not working and I am: (1) too lazy to look up the programming guide on the internet, and it's usually wrong anyway; (2) I forget what number 2 is; I think it was...oh yeah...there's not likely to be shit on anyway.
I thought I might expend the time and effort to tell you what's wrong with this piece. Now, I'm not an English professor. But I used to be married to a woman who was, for a short time after we were married, a professor of political science, even though she never finished her dissertation. Actually, the poor woman couldn't write at all, but she knew whom to fuck. Goodness, I digress. Still, I wrote some of that woman's term papers. You believe that shit? I mean...I wasn't even a Political Science major. Never was. Oh...that brings me to another point. Where the fuck do those people get off calling it Political *Science*? Huh? Tell me that, genius. There's no fucking science in politics. Now, I grant you, a political "scientist" might study and use a lot of statistics, which is something a lot of scientists use. But so do fucking pollsters. Does that make pollsters scientists? I think not. Hell, most statisticians don't call themselves scientists. Statistics are a tool for scientists, although not a necessary one. It depends on the fucking discipline. Do you see my point? Jesus. Fucking scientist. Christ. Christ...that woman. I tell you what.
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2008-05-17 02:37:08 EDT (#)
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Shut yer cunt mouth
Submitted by Dimebenda (user info) at 2008-05-17 02:20:10 EDT (#)
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I know you're not a dolt, so don't act like one.
Life is nothing without introspection and development. How can one be expected to grow from mistakes without analyzing and understanding the causes at their very roots?
Perhaps you missed the point of the post, which I admit was rather cryptic. Simply put, this is not a complaint, rather a means to realization. Sometimes by the end of a piece of writing I may find a layer of truth I am willing to accept.
Please keep that in mind next time someone forces you to read something at gunpoint that you clearly misunderstood.
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2008-05-17 02:12:23 EDT (#)
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If you're not an Ethiopian digging maggots out of your gangrenous leg for dinner at age 8 then you have no right to indulge in this sort of masturbatory depression.
White people have no reason to be depressed; spoilt, rich slobs that we are.
I am gobsmacked at the number of people who talk about how 'hard' their life is.
Here's the definitive guide. If you:
a) Are not going to freeze to death the next time night falls, and
b) Know where your next meal is coming from
Then STFU with your 'mah life is so bad' bullshit. Seriously.
Submitted by joedaddy (user info) at 2008-05-17 02:05:27 EDT (#)
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the Wachowski Brothers and Joel Silver say hi
Submitted by jasumthin (user info) at 2008-05-17 01:58:38 EDT (#)
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i'm not quite sure what you're getting at


