SUPA: Acrostic (592 hits)
Category: NoneRating: 0.83 on 28 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Fp (View user info) at 2007-04-05 13:36:46 EDT
Particular words can be
Overtly pleasing, you see
Every rhyme
Throughout time
Really speaks to thee
Yesterday, it ended for me
Grounds of coffee
An apple's core
Rinds from melons
Bank slips and more
Absolut bottles
Grapes of the vine
Empty baby bowels
User Reviews
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-04-11 23:15:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I'm willing to look past the secret code you've worked into this, but the last two lines of the first section and the final line just don't work for me. It may be random, it may have a point...either way, I dig the second half. "Empty baby bowels" simply has no reason to be there.
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2007-04-11 17:38:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Aw hell, I wasn't going to rate this because I didn't care for it and you already got more than your fair share of shitcanning for it from people whose opinions carry all the weight of a helium balloon. But, given the nature of this event thus far, I'm going to give you a 2 and compliment you for your stiff upper lip. Good show.
Submitted by Anansie (user info) at 2007-04-11 17:10:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'd probably give it a 1 under normal circumstances, but you seem to have made some enemies.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-04-10 18:51:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'll trade you +2's.
Submitted by The_Drake (user info) at 2007-04-10 18:31:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Good luck to all contestants.
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-04-09 23:58:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
did you write this in 3rd grade?
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-04-08 16:34:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This was certainly better than my piece, which lacked "meter" or "form", whatever they are.
To me, meter is what I check my gas bill against, and a form is what I have to fill in when I have an accident at work.
I have no poetic talent. I'm not a critic. I can't tell the difference between Shelley and cyanide.
You deserve more for this than the rating which has clearly been sabotaged by several people who you've argued with in the past.
If it makes you feel any better, I'm gonna get screwed out of the game by TTOM in the next round anyway.
Shame to see so many intertards getting in on the business.
Submitted by The_Drake (user info) at 2007-04-06 15:36:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Looks Like I never rated this.
i'm in the same boat....only instead of enemies, my downfall will be lack of skill.
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2007-04-06 15:10:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Well, I see the peanut gallery of internet pussies have made well sure I won't advance to the next round.
Thanks, retards.
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2007-04-06 14:38:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked this - it was honest and flowed well..
Submitted by 8track (user info) at 2007-04-05 22:17:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Yahweh (user info) at 2007-04-05 21:35:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I was going to fix all the wrongs cast against you, Foolproof, but I don't have that kind of time.
oathmeal/URMY_bitch/tracer/etc, locksly, and shineboxxx have repeatedly attacked you. It is obvious to anybody that they wanted to hurt your ratings, why else would you take the time to -2 EVERY POST?
Yet, you have carried on. And your rating kills the averages of those you have scorned. Seems you are winning this war they declared.
You have an ally. So do a few others that are maliciously attacked by the lower layer of shit that permeates this site. I will undo their ratings until they realize they cannot, and will not, matter any longer.
So Yahweh has declared, so it shall be done.
_________
BWUAHHAHHAHAH AH H HA HAA A
you fucking faggot
how do I join?
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2007-04-05 21:36:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Stand up guy right here.
You have my support in your war, sir.
Submitted by Yahweh (user info) at 2007-04-05 21:35:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I was going to fix all the wrongs cast against you, Foolproof, but I don't have that kind of time.
oathmeal/URMY_bitch/tracer/etc, locksly, and shineboxxx have repeatedly attacked you. It is obvious to anybody that they wanted to hurt your ratings, why else would you take the time to -2 EVERY POST?
Yet, you have carried on. And your rating kills the averages of those you have scorned. Seems you are winning this war they declared.
You have an ally. So do a few others that are maliciously attacked by the lower layer of shit that permeates this site. I will undo their ratings until they realize they cannot, and will not, matter any longer.
So Yahweh has declared, so it shall be done.
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2007-04-05 21:00:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Shinebox, you are the biggest pussy on this site.
Have at me with your -2s, you fucking waste.
Submitted by shinebox (user info) at 2007-04-05 20:13:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by AshK (user info) at 2007-04-05 16:51:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Worth reading (+0)
Submitted by GetNakeddd (user info) at 2007-04-05 14:46:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Hookhand (user info) at 2007-04-05 13:57:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Not sure what to make of this
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2007-04-05 14:40:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Wasn't really going for meter or rhyme.
Just wrote it.
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-04-05 14:32:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
+1 as the concept was a great idea but the execution needed development in the meter department.
Submitted by Zebra (user info) at 2007-04-05 14:14:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I'm changing my average for this to -1.
After a second read, I am less enamoured with the idea and it just seems lazy to me.
TTOM's so far was really the only one 'worth reading' and this one should probably be rated the same as sicosemen's "I've seen better."
Submitted by Hookhand (user info) at 2007-04-05 13:57:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Not sure what to make of this
Submitted by Zebra (user info) at 2007-04-05 13:54:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
This was a cute idea which could have used more than the few minutes effort it probably got.
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2007-04-05 13:53:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I thought the same thing, but fuck it. I spelled what I wanted.
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-04-05 13:52:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Seems to me it needs one more line.
Don't know why.
Of course, I know very little about poetry.
Submitted by Yahweh (user info) at 2007-04-05 13:45:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
And it was good.
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2007-04-05 13:38:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I had tissues in my nose to prevent snot from dripping on my papers...I no longer have tissues in mine nose.
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2007-04-05 13:38:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Not a problem, TTOM. I pride myself on ruined electronics.
Submitted by The_taste_of_Monkeys (user info) at 2007-04-05 13:37:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
The last line made me fucking spray spittle all over my laptop, thanks!